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This post is sorta like Describe the person above you. I had 10234 posts on a different website on this.

Heres how it goes

Every person that wants to contribute says 1 sentence. And you come up with these wacko stories. Sometimes it could get ugly.

This is a ongoing story

Example of story

Person 1: I was defeated on thinktanks today by somebody

Person 2: I was humiliated when he got 6 points and I got 3.

Person 1: Later that day I got into the car and headed for Hawaii.

Person 3: While I was on the airplane, It took me 3 hours to open the peanuts bag.

Person 1: Once I got the peanut bag open there werent any in it.

So on a and so fourth

I DONT KNOW IF YOU GUYS WOULD LIKE IT BUT GIVE IT A TRY. PLEASE DONT INSULT PEOPLE BECAUSE IT COULD GET UGLY. IT GET INTRESTING WHAT PEOPLE MAKE UP.

This doesnt have to be real usually its fiction.

I dont creat the first post.

PLEASE ONLY POST ONCE AND WAIT UNTIL OTHERS POST.

Good luck B)

Cloud

Last edited: Thursday, March 24, 2005 at 5:59:08 AM

Wednesday, March 23, 2005 at 1:09:58 AM

Back into the chamber turning, all my soul within me burning,
Soon again I heard a tapping somewhat louder than before.
`Surely,' said I, `surely that is something at my window lattice;
Let me see then, what thereat is, and this mystery explore -
Let my heart be still a moment and this mystery explore; -
'Tis the wind and nothing more!'
EDIT:
Open here I flung the shutter, when, with many a flirt and flutter,
In there stepped a stately raven of the saintly days of yore.
Not the least obeisance made he; not a minute stopped or stayed he;
But, with mien of lord or lady, perched above my chamber door -
Perched upon a bust of Pallas just above my chamber door -
Perched, and sat, and nothing more

Birdies!!! XD

Last edited: Monday, March 28, 2005 at 5:40:42 PM

Monday, March 28, 2005 at 5:39:01 PM

I crouched behind the door...

Monday, March 28, 2005 at 7:53:50 PM

Im sorry, I am new at this lol
The ENd!

Monday, March 28, 2005 at 7:54:42 PM

No, Sherm, it was a poem y Edgar Allen Poe: "The Raven". Here's the rest:

Then this ebony bird beguiling my sad fancy into smiling,
By the grave and stern decorum of the countenance it wore,
`Though thy crest be shorn and shaven, thou,' I said, `art sure no craven.
Ghastly grim and ancient raven wandering from the nightly shore -
Tell me what thy lordly name is on the Night's Plutonian shore!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'

Much I marvelled this ungainly fowl to hear discourse so plainly,
Though its answer little meaning - little relevancy bore;
For we cannot help agreeing that no living human being
Ever yet was blessed with seeing bird above his chamber door -
Bird or beast above the sculptured bust above his chamber door,
With such name as `Nevermore.'

But the raven, sitting lonely on the placid bust, spoke only,
That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour.
Nothing further then he uttered - not a feather then he fluttered -
Till I scarcely more than muttered `Other friends have flown before -
On the morrow will he leave me, as my hopes have flown before.'
Then the bird said, `Nevermore.'

Startled at the stillness broken by reply so aptly spoken,
`Doubtless,' said I, `what it utters is its only stock and store,
Caught from some unhappy master whom unmerciful disaster
Followed fast and followed faster till his songs one burden bore -
Till the dirges of his hope that melancholy burden bore
Of "Never-nevermore."'

But the raven still beguiling all my sad soul into smiling,
Straight I wheeled a cushioned seat in front of bird and bust and door;
Then, upon the velvet sinking, I betook myself to linking
Fancy unto fancy, thinking what this ominous bird of yore -
What this grim, ungainly, gaunt, and ominous bird of yore
Meant in croaking `Nevermore.'

This I sat engaged in guessing, but no syllable expressing
To the fowl whose fiery eyes now burned into my bosom's core;
This and more I sat divining, with my head at ease reclining
On the cushion's velvet violet lining that the lamp-light gloated o'er,
But whose velvet violet lining with the lamp-light gloating o'er,
She shall press, ah, nevermore!

Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose foot-falls tinkled on the tufted floor.
`Wretch,' I cried, `thy God hath lent thee - by these angels he has sent thee
Respite - respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore!
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe, and forget this lost Lenore!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'

`Prophet!' said I, `thing of evil! - prophet still, if bird or devil! -
Whether tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted -
On this home by horror haunted - tell me truly, I implore -
Is there - is there balm in Gilead? - tell me - tell me, I implore!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'

`Prophet!' said I, `thing of evil! - prophet still, if bird or devil!
By that Heaven that bends above us - by that God we both adore -
Tell this soul with sorrow laden if, within the distant Aidenn,
It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels named Lenore -
Clasp a rare and radiant maiden, whom the angels named Lenore?'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'

`Be that word our sign of parting, bird or fiend!' I shrieked upstarting -
`Get thee back into the tempest and the Night's Plutonian shore!
Leave no black plume as a token of that lie thy soul hath spoken!
Leave my loneliness unbroken! - quit the bust above my door!
Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my door!'
Quoth the raven, `Nevermore.'

And the raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting
On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door;
And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon's that is dreaming,
And the lamp-light o'er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor;
And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted - nevermore!

What a great guy!!! XD XD XD

Monday, March 28, 2005 at 7:56:47 PM

OK, IM not into poetry

Monday, March 28, 2005 at 8:00:20 PM

^^ you mean he was a kook ! Lol

New one :

While I was on my way to santa's house I happened to step in big doodoo.


Monday, March 28, 2005 at 8:02:46 PM

BiogShow, I didn't write that, Poe did.

Monday, March 28, 2005 at 8:07:13 PM

No, I was commenting on your last line of your post


Monday, March 28, 2005 at 8:13:38 PM

Im supprise this post on the other website got over 10,000 post! Different people I guess. B)

Cloud

Wednesday, March 30, 2005 at 7:23:49 AM

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